No book is ever long enough for the Book Devouring Horde! House Andrews gifted us a little more.
This bonus scene is safe after Page 438, last scene of Chapter 40 of This Kingdom Will Not Kill Me
Lady Maggie.
Doran jogged up the steps to the curtain wall and passed through the keep tower’s wide-open gates. After the bright daylight, the interior was steeped in pleasantly cool shadows. Summer was coming and with it, Kair Toren’s heat. Not that the heat bothered him, but he missed the southern coast. The low hills of the Golden Valley ringed in terraced fields that curved like ribbons along the slopes. The turquoise waters of Ceter Lake, where the air smelled of flowers and blooming trees. The golden sand beaches, gently sloping into a warm ocean filled with bright fish flittering through the translucent depths.
Kair Toren had a rougher coast, the hills more rugged, the sea darker with a harsher surf. The city itself felt rougher too, unlike the idyllic white walls of Dilem. He’d been in this damn place for too long. He knew he was homesick, and she made it worse.

Doran passed through the tower and stepped out onto the terrace overlooking the Citadel Garden. A large table waited for him by the stone rail, offering a glittering glass pitcher of red wine, another of water, and two plain wooden cups. Merro Ridan sprawled in one of the two chairs, his mane of blond hair hanging loose, Doran’s formal breastplate resting on the ground next to him.
Ridan gave him a wave. The wine pitcher sitting on the table was a third empty.
Doran took the other chair and nodded at the wine. “Started early, I see.”
“It’s fucking hot, and your armor is heavy. Do you want me to pass out from the exhaustion?”
“Keep drinking and you might.”
Ridan rolled his eyes, picked up a jug of water and splashed some into his cup. “Better?”
“I’m looking out for you. Be grateful.”
“Oh, I always am.” Ridan took a long swig. “Are you going to tell me why I had to drop what I was doing and play dress up?”
“What were you doing?”
Ridan grimaced. “Having a chat with our Redeemer guest.”
Ah. That. “Anything?”
Ridan shook his head. “It’s a waste of time. I can apply pressure, but you can always tell when a man won’t break. We’re not getting anything out of that one. We can either cut his throat or cut him loose.”
Doran stretched his legs. Trying to gather information about the Order of the Redeemers had proved irritatingly difficult. He appreciated loyalty, expected and respected it, but fanatics grated on his nerves. The way Redeemers revered Silveren was unnatural. He might as well be one of the saints.
He couldn’t get a read on the man. Silveren was… slippery. He trailed the Second Prince like a morose shadow, avoiding attention, dodging conflicts, like he was made of smoke. Half of the time, you forgot he was in the room.
They had invited one of Silveren’s kardars over for a stay. He wasn’t a prisoner, but he’d been strongly encouraged to partake of their hospitality. The man proved savvy enough to understand what the invitation meant.
Like most Redeemers, he had a sordid past. In his former life, he’d been in charge of a fort, tasked with collecting taxes from the nearby domains, which he had embezzled. That by itself was enough of a crime, but he’d dipped into the garrison’s supplies, and when the raiders came, the fort fell. He’d barely escaped Sauven’s wrath and found a place in the Redeemer Tower.
As potential informants went, he seemed like a sure bet. Greedy. Opportunistic. Untroubled by honor. And yet nothing they’d offered him so far had moved him to break his loyalty to Silveren. He was steadfast.
Doran poured a splash of wine into his glass. Looking for informants wasn’t uncommon. Silveren and he were playing an old game, and they both knew the unspoken rules. Killing the Redeemer kardar would escalate things. There would be a time for that later. For now, he would keep it calm and civil.
“Cut him loose.”
Ridan nodded.
That’s what Doran had always liked about him. No matter the circumstances, Ridan always preferred an underhanded solution. Scheming came to him like breathing, and combined with a healthy appetite for violence, he made for a dangerous opponent. But he didn’t let his urges cloud his judgement. Ridan wasn’t conniving; he was shrewd and calculating, the kind of advisor who never lost sight of the big picture. They were rarely at odds.
Ridan studied him now. “Do you want me to try another one?”
Doran shook his head. “Not now. Silveren will be wary. We have time.”
Eventually, he would have to take the Redeemers on, but open warfare was never his first choice. He preferred to trap and contain, and in the case of an entire knight order, the most prudent course would be to remove them from the field. An expedition outside the borders, a long campaign somewhere far enough away, something to keep them busy…
Eventually an opportunity would present itself, and the old buzzard sitting on the throne trusted him enough to be swayed. At the right time, it wouldn’t take much. A word, a carefully planned encounter, and the Redeemers would be off, leaving him free to fight his private war.
“Well?” Ridan toasted him with a cup. “Don’t keep me in suspense. Who is she?”
Doran smiled at him. “I have found the one.”
Ridan blinked. “The one what?”
“The one I want.”
Ridan choked on his wine. “Will wonders never cease? Come on, give us more. Who is she? Which family?”
“I don’t know.”
Ridan set his cup down with some force. “What do you mean you don’t know?”
“I looked into her and found nothing. She’s hiding.”
Ridan’s eyes lit up. “She’s a mystery then. You never could resist a secret. What’s her name?”
“Maggie.”
Ridan frowned. “Odd name. Where is she from?”
“I don’t know. She speaks like she’s lived in Kair Toren all her life, with the best tutors and a proper education, but she isn’t from the city. If she was, she would know what I look like.”
“Of course she would. Perhaps she would have commissioned a drawing of you. Pinned to a wall above her bed so she could gaze upon it as she pleasured herself.”
Doran allowed himself a small smile.
“Is she even a noble? Can you at least tell that much?”
“She is. And from a prominent family.”
“Oh?”
“It’s the way she speaks. She looks you in the eye. She doesn’t fawn, preen, or second-guess herself.”
Ridan nodded. “She isn’t checking in her head whether her words align with her conduct lessons?”
“Yes. She was guarded but sure. Several days ago, I went to see her with Berengur, and she was exactly the same then.”
Ridan sighed. “Still looking for his long-lost brother?”
“Not anymore.”
Ridan glanced at him, surprised.
“She told him where Pelegrin has been, and why he chose to stay there.”
She had told Berengur a lot more than that. The way she’d spoken moved him. He’d kept turning her words over in his head on the way back to the Citadel.
“How would she know that?” Ridan demanded. “I’ve had people looking for Pelegrin for months. Nothing. Not a trace.”
“You said it yourself. She’s a mystery.”
“A mystery with access to a wide web of informants?” Ridan tapped his finger on the table for emphasis. “This worries me. Is she an imperial agent?”
“No.”
“What makes you so sure?”
“She doesn’t have the ruthlessness.” Doran recalled her limping and smiled again. “She is smart and sharp, but there is little pretense there. She’s genuine.”
Ridan groaned. “By the Aspects. She’s got her hooks in you. And what did this paragon of virtue ask in return for Pelegrin’s location?”
“Nothing.”
“That’s worse. She’s playing the long game. What did she want today?”
“She came to warn me. We have a man hunter.”
Ridan sat up straighter.
They had run across that type of predator in Dilem. It was a gruesome affair, savage enough for Doran to seek outside counsel. Fortunately, a priest of the Scholar in Dilem had made a study of man hunters. They were rare, afflicted with a particular sickness of the mind, often unable to distinguish between lust and murder. For them it was one and the same, and they chased the thrill of torture and death as if possessed. Sooner or later, they made mistakes and they got caught, but not before they’d reaped their bloody harvest.
“This one hunts knights,” Doran said.
“Shuhoven,” Ridan breathed. “Damn. I never liked that asshole, but he was good.”
“So is the hunter. He has magic, and it makes him faster. Eliarde is his next target.”
“According to your Lady Maggie?” Ridan leaned forward, no trace of humor on his face. “Let me guess, she warned you and asked for nothing in return? Does this not worry you? You have been baited, you have taken the hook, and now she will reel you in.”
“Don’t get ideas.”
“Let me kill her. It will be clean and quick. Think of what’s at stake. Of what we’ve worked for. Think of how high you’re aiming. Why would she show up now, when you are on the cusp of attaining your goals?”
Doran shook his head. “You’ll understand when you meet her. Merro, I mean it. No accidents. Not a hair on her head. She is mine.”
“Fuck me.” Ridan stared at him. “Of all the women you have had, why this one?”
He had enjoyed many women. Some were beautiful, some intelligent, ambitious, innocent, dangerous. But he’d never wanted to take any of them home. The game of seduction had grown stale ages ago, so much so that he could predict how things would end from the first conversation. Years had passed since any woman could hold his interest.
There was something about Maggie that pulled at him. They sat in the garden, talking, and he kept picturing her on the balcony in Ar-Vellen, with the sapphire blue sea behind her. He wanted to show the castle to her, to see her smile at him, to carry her off to his bed and have her until she was exhausted.
If she hadn’t left, he could’ve sat in that garden with her for hours. She was gone now, and the moment he had loaded her into a carriage, he’d realized he’d wanted her to stay. He would rather be talking to her now instead of Ridan, and it irked him that she wasn’t here.
He didn’t feel like explaining all of that, and Ridan wouldn’t understand it anyway.
“It is reason enough that I want her.”
Ridan slumped in his chair. “I swear, you will put me into an early grave. Have you communicated your interest?”
“I hinted.”
“And?”
“She ran away.”
Ridan threw his arms up. “At last, there is justice in this world. The one woman you finally want doesn’t want you. I’ve changed my mind. I like her. Just a bit. Not enough to keep me from killing her…”
“Merro,” Doran sank some command into his voice.
Ridan grinned at him. “I got it, I got it. Not a hair on her head. Can I at least look into her? Is that allowed?”
“Yes. Find out what you can. Be discreet.”
Ridan put a hand on his heart. “When have I ever been otherwise?”
“I want to know who she belongs to, and where she comes from. Tell me as soon as you have something.”
Ridan beamed at him. “As you will, my lord.”



Nice! Thanks for this!
Almost first
They don’t realize that she isn’t anyone’s. She is hers.
On my 4th reread and it just is the crème de la crème.
I ran here from Instagram!!! I had to read it
Me too!
My favourite book so far by the authorlords and I loved all of them
I’m done for this love triangle
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I m here so early for once. 😆 devoured the like the bdh we are
loving this pov!
Ooooh, the plot is even more thicker than we thought.. love this! Love Maggie! Love This Kingdom.
ahhh!!! love love love it!
THANK YOU!
Ahhhhhh! Do many twists. I’m shipping the Sleepless Duke!!!!
Amazing. Yes. Thank you!
thank you, thank you, thank you! 💜
definitely looking forward to any more tidbits & bonus scenes!
it’s so wild seeing the other perspectives. I love it. lol
We need the second book please! 😭😭😭
Thank you for this! Rules out one theory of mine. On to the next!
It’s nice to have more about him since he doesn’t get much “screen time” in the first book. He’s intriguing.
Loved this. Tells me more about his ambitions, and plans for Maggie. But it also confirmed my nagging feeling… she’s a respite for him and he wants to sleep with her…but what would she get out of the deal? There’s a certain amount of arrogance that is hard to overcome when you’re the golden knight.
Love how both the right hand men are like, threat! let me take her out!
Amazing book. 4th re-read as well. Loved the plot twists as if the book is fighting back! This is going to be fun.
Daaang that’s good. I liked him in the book but he’s really scary and his way of thinking is all wrong. Love the crazy tho keep it up my boy ! I just hope Maggie will get to make her own choices, no matter who she ends up with.
Ooh, nice. Thank you!
Oh!!! Interesting to see what Arvel is thinking but I don’t think Maggie will pick him. 😁
On no, Maggie doesn’t even know she’s assembling an eager harem
Thank you so much! I enjoyed this book so much and I don’t want it to end ever.
Doran is a liiittle late to the wooing Maggie game haha I’m glad we saw a glimpse of his pov!
Thank you!
And I like him even less now…
excellent! Awesome! Worthy of the Author Lords. Yes, BDH can never get enough. Thank you.
The many layers of this book and so very interesting characters are amazing. Every time I read I find something new.
Such a nice bonus scene so soon after the best lest book drop that ever dropped.. The BDH is truly spoiled😍 love the pov from Doran and am soooo intrigued about his real goals and I know this sooo greedy but cannot wa*t for the next book
Thank you for the yummy little tidbit!
Excellent! I love this peek into Arvel <3 Thank you!!
Rellas seems to have a problem with its knightly orders: supposedly “holy” orders devoted to worshipping aspects of the Warrior Aspect of the Divine, but at least two of them are controlled by men interested mainly in using them as bases to gain temporal power in the kingdom.
Silveren wants to use the Redeemers to destroy the current ruling family – and then probably ascend to his “rightful” throne over a heap of smoking corpses.
And now Arvel appears to be using the Defenders as a springboard to the same throne. The only difference is that he doesn’t seem to be planning to burn the whole place down as a feature of his own takeover.
Now we just need to see what Lord and Lady Bors want to do with the Conquerors and it will be a perfect sweep.
Shades of the Templars…
Thanks for this insight into the Golden Knight. The story just keeps getting better!
As I was reading this POV, I was saying “oh no!” quite a lot. First Ramond, now Doran, and the guy at the end of book 1 (not saying his name so I don’t spoil it for anyone who hasn’t read the entire book yet). Plus, the hair ornament.
This is one huge conundrum. Epic fighting commences soon!
Oooh Doran and Evarard really are mirrors of each other. Interesting how they basically had the same conversation with their seconds about Maggie. But something tells me Evarard will learn that Maggie is her own much faster than Doran.
Ramond is already learning that. lol
team Ra-ggie 😉
Oooh! A Monday snippet, to cheer weary Horde hearts! This makes my smile–and totally uplifts a hard day–thank you so much, Ilona and Gordon! Love, love, love Maggie! And Stelkas…!
Ooo hopefully we do get to see Maggie at the beautiful coast he’s describing but he’s not the one for her. She has her sleepless Duke already but I love that he loves her. She can use that to her advantage later. I’m hoping the golden knight will take a fancy in our deadly fire mage. They’d make a beautiful couple.
That was a very interesting bonus scene. Arvel is serious about Maggie and trying to marry her. But it sounds like he is also plotting “something”. Probably trying to become King.
Thanks for the bonus scene.
Love this scene, love the hints at Arval’s long term plans are. Now I have to go back and read TKWNKM again 😄
Thank you for the bonus content!!
I knew there had to be much more to Doran. He couldn’t have achieved his position without being more than a pretty face.
This adds to the complexity of this amazing world and characters!
Now I like him because he truly cares about Maggie for Maggie
Oh interesting. I guess this means they will run into each other again quite frequently.
well, this certainly seems to give us a big hint of things to come……and might confirm one of my theories!
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seems as though Silveren is propping up the second prince perhaps. one theory i have is that the second prince is behind a lot of this chaos.
But Maggie says Silveren kills the second prince. So unless that is on big ruse i think Silveren is working for himself
Oooh explanation on why he wasn’t wering his own armor! I bet he flexed extra at archery when he met Maggie! I mean he knew she was coming.
I think we the BDH are so spoiled. But alas – I don’t care 😁
Thank you House Andrews and Mod R. This was a wonderful surprise 💗💗💗
This book and its world are amazing!!
Thank you for having mercy on us, the BDH. We are your (somewhat demanding) slaves. I don’t know if I like Arvel or not. He’s a step away from smug. I like a man who knows his own worth but doesn’t need to flaunt it. Like, oh gee, what *is* his name . . . ah yes. Ramond. That one.
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Ramond is so much like Rogan and I am SOO HERE FOR IT!!😍
Ooooo more depths to that man than I thought. The story just got even more interesting! So many hints in this little snippet! I loved Maggie 1 so much. It wasn’t that bad waiting for it tbh, but the wait for Maggie 2 is really going to be hard. (Insert big gusty sigh) Thanks for making my Mon worth getting up!
I love it! Awesome book – well worth the wait – read it on Kindle and now am impatiently waiting for my hard cover copy!
yes! more snippets!! I really really want to like Doran. please please don’t make him slimy
I really really hate him right know😂
wow….. shiny 🙂
Thanks for the snippet.
Happy Monday
Another Kair Toren soul lost to Maggie!! How many will there be before the end??
Geez what an arrogant piece of work, damn. I knew he was arrogant, just not THAT arrogant.
Good Luck, Maggie! You’re gonna need it to deal with that one.
I hope she knowcks him down a notch.
Sooo I take it Doran has his eyes set on the Throne? 🫣
Love these snippets!
yikes…are we taking a tally of all the characters who say “X will put me into an early grave”? I feel like a few characters have said that already.
this flavors the perception Maggie and others have about Arvel. perhaps he did not “run away” after a failure and because people no longer admired him. he isolated himself to regroup.
Ooohhhh so exciting! However, I’m still shipping the sleepless duke!!