
A massive cavern spread in front of us, awash in bioluminescence like some bizarre rave. It resembled an enormous egg set on its side, with the wider end to the right ending in a solid wall and the narrow end to the left splitting off into several dark passages. The cavern’s floor sloped to the center where a wide stream ran through the cave from left to right. The water was like glass, perfectly clear.
At the banks, the stream branched into several small pools bordered by rimstone dams, some shallow, others deeper. The pools flowed into each other, stretching toward a flat island on our right. The stream split around it and emptied into a lake, its waters moving slowly and disappearing under a spectacular flowstone wall where layers of calcite formed a frozen stone waterfall.
“I need lights, people!” Melissa called out.
The mining crew spread out, planting floodlights along the nearest wall. The portable generator on the central cart sputtered into life, and bright electric light illuminated the cavern. The sloping floor was ridged with calcite, and it looked slick. A good way to break a leg.
“Much better,” Melissa declared. “It’s almost like we know what we’re doing.”
London nodded to the tank. Aaron moved to the left and planted himself in the narrower part of the cave, between the dark tunnels and the mining crew. London stayed at the entrance, guarding our exit route. The three strikers fanned out along the perimeter.
It was my turn to shine. The cavern walls were awash with swirls of bright green mixed with rust-colored metallic deposits. Promising.
I took a deep breath and flexed.
The official term was talent activation, but to me it felt like flexing a muscle I didn’t normally use. The world turned crystal clear. The edges of the rimstone dams and contours of the flowstone waterfall came into sharp focus, as if I’d adjusted my eyes to higher resolution. The outlines of individual mineral deposits glowed slightly.
I focused on the closest wall, scanning and evaluating, sorting through different hues. Malachite, copper-rich chalcopyrite, decent but not exciting. Cuprite, quartz, calcite, trash, garbage, junk…
A patch of funky plants to the left glowed with dull, pale yellow. Healer Slipper. A weird variant, but definitely in the same ballpark as the more common varieties. If processed, it would yield a potent broad-spectrum antibiotic. A decent haul, if nothing else showed up.
In the wake of the gate catastrophe and the emergence of the Talents, humanity had tried to find some frame of reference. We settled on video games. A lot of the Talent classification mirrored the familiar game classes: tanks, healers, scouts, and so on. The closest video game match for my talent would’ve been appraiser, but the government nixed that one because it didn’t sound heroic enough and was too “materialistic,” which was utterly hilarious considering what I did. Unlike Melissa, who only sensed ores and only when she was on top of them, I evaluated everything in my environment, organic or inorganic.
So far, the cavern has been relatively disappointing. Usually, orange gates offered a little more. I pivoted slightly, turning away from the wall.
The inside of the stream lit up like a Christmas tree. Well, that was something.
“Gold in the water,” I announced. “Check the pools.”
“Go!” Melissa barked.
The miners scrambled over calcite walls. The pools directly in front of them ran a little deeper, and the water came up to their thighs.
Sanders thrust his hand into the pool and pulled up a tangerine-sized gold nugget. “Holy shit!”
The mining crew erupted into a controlled frenzy. Half of the miners went into the pools with buckets, while the other half positioned themselves on the shore, emptying the buckets into wheelbarrows.
I kept scanning. Gold was okay. Just okay.
“We got time, people,” Melissa called out. “Don’t hurt yourself. Slow is smooth, and smooth is fast.”
A bright swath of deep crimson flared on the edge of my vision. The colors of the glow didn’t always make sense, but red usually meant something valuable. I turned slowly, following it, and focused. A thick vein running from the center of the cavern all the way to the far wall…
It couldn’t be. I squinted at it to make sure I wasn’t imagining it.
No, it was there. And the crimson got deeper at the other end of the cavern.
“Melissa?”
“Yes?”
“Dump the gold.”
The mining crew stopped. Sanders closed his fists around a handful of nuggets and hugged them to his chest. Gold fever was a real thing. Something about the bright shiny yellow metal made people lose their minds.
I pointed to the beginning of the vein along the wall of the island, by the two pools closest to the shore. “Adamantite. From here to there. Solid, less than a foot down. We’ll need more carts.”
Melissa splashed into the stream to the adamantite vein buried under calcite deposits and put her bare hands onto the stone. She grunted, squeezed the rock surface with her fingers, shook from the strain, and stumbled back.
“Goddamn! Team One here! Team Two there! I want those drills running five minutes ago!”
The gold went flying. The mining crew grabbed their drills. Safety glasses and noise-dampening headphones went on, and they waded into the river and attacked the dams and the island.
Gold was expensive but adamantite was twelve times more valuable, because it could be refined into adamant. In the same family as osmium, adamant was incredibly durable. Adamant-enhanced armor could withstand machine gun fire. Adamant-coated blades cut through solid metal and monster bones like butter, without losing their edge.
We found it rarely and usually in small deposits. A cubic yard of adamantite was a record-breaking haul that would mean a big bonus for every guild member that entered this breach. We had a lot more than a cubic yard here. In all of my time crawling in and out of the breaches, I had never found a vein half that large.
The drills chiseled at the rock with a dull roar. The first chunk of adamantite fell free, a dark, almost black basketball-sized rock that looked like frozen tar in the crystal-clear stream. The drills stopped as everyone stared at it. Melissa tried to lift it out of the water, couldn’t – it was ridiculously heavy – and laughed.
“We’re gunna be rich!” someone yelled.
“Ada, I love you!” Melissa declared. “Marry me!”
“Sorry, I don’t want to ruin such a good friendship.”
People laughed. Next to me, London cracked a smile.
“Friendzoned,” Melissa groaned.
“It’s not you, it’s me, Mel. I’m the problem.”
More laughter.
Melissa shook her head. “Back to work, people! And someone help me with this rock.”
The miners resumed their drilling.
The vein continued under the stream, veering across the cavern floor to the left and behind the far wall. Getting adamantite from under the water would be cumbersome, and our time was short. The wall deposit lay deeper, but it was a better bet.
I went down the slope to the water. The best place to cross was to the left, by Aaron, where the stream was relatively shallow. I headed there and waded in, careful where I put my feet. The rocks were damn slippery, and the water came up past my knee. Magnaprene wasn’t the most comfortable fabric, but it was waterproof.
I hiked over the shallow calcite ridges to the wall, pulled a can of fluorescent paint from the pocket of my coveralls, and set about tracing the contours of the deposit in bright Safety Yellow. A hell of a find. Not that I would get anything out of it other than bragging rights. Government employees didn’t get gate loot bonuses, and that wasn’t why I’d taken this job.
The steady roar of the drills filled the cavern.
I was thirty-three years old when I saw my first glow. One of the larger US guilds somehow obtained permission to sell sebrian knives to the public. Sebrian was found only in breaches, and the knife prices started at $1,000 for a tiny pocket blade. Our advertising agency had taken the contract and promptly sent it to me with the key phrase of “rugged luxury.”
I was sitting in my office staring at the knife and trying to figure out the right approach, when the blade turned pale pink. The glow refused to fade, and when I focused on it, something in my brain clicked. The weight, the density, the structure of the metal somehow popped into my mind and combined into a specific … profile was the best word.
I drove to the ER. I thought I was dying. Twenty-four hours later the DDC came calling with a contract and a patriotic sales pitch. Assessors like me were rare, and the government hoarded us, to the point of making it illegal for guilds to hire their own private assessors. The guilds had poured an obscene amount of money into lobbying against that law but got nowhere.
The invasion wrecked my life. I’d looked at that contract and realized I could do something about it. Every time I went into the breach, I found something to make us safer. Today it was adamantite. A drop in the bucket, but it was my drop.
I finished tracing the wall and set the can on a rock.
Elena crossed the stream and lingered on my left, looking toward the tunnels. She peered at the dark passageways, turned, her face sour, and called, “Stella!”
Stella, who was on the other shore watching the miners, didn’t move.
“STELLA!” Elena roared.
The dog handler spun around.
The scout waved her over. “Bring the dog!”
Stella splashed through the stream, Bear on a leash, and trekked over the ridges to us.
“I need you to check the tunnels!” Elena yelled over the drilling noise.
“Which tunnel?”
“Start with the left!”
Bear yanked at her leash, jerking Stella backward, toward the stream. Stella said some command I didn’t catch.
Bear yanked on the leash and erupted into barks.
Elena waved her arms. “Control your dog –”
Something burst out of the middle tunnel. It swept past Aaron, a vaguely humanoid shape in pale blue garments, so fast it was a blur. Four other blurs chased it, wrapped in dark gray. They tore past the tank in a flash.
Aaron’s top half – shield, armor, and body – slid to the side and fell to the ground.
For a horrifying moment, I stared straight at the stump of his torso, still standing upright. It was standing upright.
The blurs wrapped around us. I froze. They spun about me like a whirlwind, the four gray beings striking and slicing, while the creature in blue parried with impossible speed. I caught a glimpse of arms in dark armor gripping silver blades and inhuman faces with fangs bared. A second, and they tore across the cavern toward the wall and the mining crew.
Untouched. I was somehow uninjured.
I turned to Stella on my right.
Her head was missing. There was her torso in indigo magnaprene, her neck, but no head.
The headless body crumpled to the ground.
A gasp came from the side. I turned on autopilot, still trying to process Stella’s missing head. Elena’s guts spilled out of her stomach. The scout clutched at herself. Dark blood poured out of her mouth. She made a horrible gurgling noise and fell.
This couldn’t be happening. It was a weird, horrible nightmare. I was dreaming that I found the magic motherlode of adamantite and then monsters came and killed everyone.
The air smelled like blood and bile. To the left four inhuman creatures tore at their prey in the blue robe, running on the walls and leaping in for the kill only to be knocked aside. Three miners floated in the stream, face down and the water was red, so red…
Oh God. It’s real. It’s all real.
Panic smashed into me like an icy hammer. I had to get out of here. Now.
The only safe exit was on the other side of the stream. I sprinted across the ridges to the water.
To the left, the fight swung back and forth along the lake’s shore.
I slid over the first rimstone damn, tore through the pool, climbed over the other side, and landed into the stream. Water came up to my thighs and I waded through it, squeezing every drop of speed out of my body.
Half of the mining crew was still drilling.
“Run!” I screamed, waving my arms. “Run!”
Sanders turned, plucking the headphones off his left ear, saw my face, whipped around, saw the creatures, hurled the drill aside, howled, and ran for the entrance. The line of miners broke as people charged to the exit.
Time stretched like molasses. There was only me and the water trying to stop me. I just had to make it across the stream.
At the cave entrance, Melissa was scrambling up the slope, toward London. The blade warden stared straight at me. Our gazes met.
Help me…
A door slammed shut in London’s eyes.
No. No!
Melissa shoved Anja Presa out of her way. The slender woman slid on the rocks and fell, rolling down to the stream.
I can’t die here. I have to get home to my kids!
I was running so fast. Faster than I’d ever run in my life, and I wasted precious breath on a scream. “Wait! Wait for me!”
London’s face was cold like ice. He yanked something off his belt. A grenade. He carried aetherium concussive grenades to be used as a last resort.
“Throw it!” Melissa howled and ran past him.
London looked straight at me.
Alex! No!
He dropped the grenade. It rolled toward the stream, bouncing over the limestone. The blue forcefield of his warden talent flared into life, wrapping around London. He turned and fled into the tunnel.
The world exploded.
The blast slammed into Sanders ten yards ahead of me. Water punched me off my feet. I flew like a rag doll and smashed against solid rock. My right leg snapped like a toothpick. My spine crunched. Agony splashed across my side and bit into my ribs. My ears rang, my head swam, and the air in my lungs turned to fire.
I tried to breathe and couldn’t. There was water on my face. I was in the stream face down. I had to get upright, or I would drown.
I wrenched myself up.
Bright white aetherium smoke filled the cave. I couldn’t see anything, I couldn’t hear anything, I couldn’t breathe. I could only hold still as the pain drowned me.
“Mom! Don’t die!”
I won’t. I promise.
I forced myself to take a tiny breath. It felt like jagged glass cutting its way through my throat. I coughed through it and willed myself to take another. And another, swimming through the pain, one tiny sip of air at a time.
The smoke drifted up. My vision cleared. I was sitting in one of the pools by the shore, with the water up to my armpits, with my back pressed against the rimstone wall. Next to me a severed human head rested on the pool’s bottom. The dark curly hair swirled with the current. Stella.
It should’ve hit me like a semi, but instead I simply noted it, the same way I noted the blood spreading from my right leg and the broken glass that ground in my lungs with every breath.
I pulled the leg of my coveralls up, out of the boot. A jagged bone cut through the skin of my calf. A compound fracture. Okay. I tugged my pant leg over it.
I had to get the hell out of here. Out of this cavern. Out of the breach.
The exit was no more, blocked by a wall of rubble. London’s grenade collapsed the ceiling of the tunnel. He and Melissa left me to die.
The clump of alien creatures passed along the opposite wall, all but floating over the debris that had sealed the exit. I didn’t hear any gunfire. Our escorts were dead.
The aliens darted to the right, absorbed in their fight. They weren’t targeting the humans. Aaron, Stella, Elena, they were simply in the way, cut down in passing as the four creatures in gray tried to kill the being in blue. And if their fight swung this way, I would be in the way, too.
I had to get out of the line of fire.
The wall in front of me, where the exit used to be, was at least forty yards away and sheer.
I looked over my shoulder. There was a niche in the wall behind me, next to my yellow paint marks, natural depression in the rock. A place to hide.
I turned around. My right leg screamed. Standing was a no go. I would have to crawl on all fours.
I clenched my teeth and crawled out of the pool.
My right leg burned, sending stabs of hot pain through my knee. I could do it. Stay low, move slowly, don’t present a threat. It was only pain. I could endure pain.
Twenty yards to the wall.
Fifteen.
I hit my knee against a sharp rock, and my weight landed on my injured leg. The world went white for a second. I sucked in a small breath and kept moving.
Ten yards. Almost there.
Almost.
My fingers touched the stone. I turned around and tucked myself into the niche, pressing my back against the wall. There was a trail of my blood across the cave floor.
The creature in blue was still moving, but only two gray blurs remained. The third lay on the rocks, a smudge of dark fabric that shifted whenever the fight drew closer, stretching toward it like a living thing. I couldn’t see the fourth.
To the right something moved by the rock.
I sat very still.
A furry head with big ears poked out from behind an outcropping.
Bear.
I licked my lips, trying to get my mouth to work. “Bear.” I could only manage a whisper. “Come.”
The German Shepherd crawled toward me, pressed against my thigh, and let out a soft whine.
“They left you, too.”
I hugged the dog to me. We sat by the wall and watched the fight tear across the cave. The blurs were so fast. How could anyone move that quickly? It should’ve been biologically impossible.
One of the remaining gray blurs collapsed.
The last gray attacker shot toward us. It took me half a second to realize it wasn’t a coincidence. It was aiming for me.
There was no time to run, no time to do anything. I threw my arm in front of Bear shielding her on pure instinct. The gray blur loomed above us… and stopped.
I finally saw it clearly, a tall creature with four arms, wrapped in a tattered gray cloak. Its hands had too many fingers, long and clawed, and each hand clenched a sword. It stared at me with terrifying eyes, its irises missing, its sclera a solid mass of solid black, and its mouth, on the face of white pearlescent skin, was a wide, dark slash filled with nightmarish teeth. A blue blade protruded from its chest.
This is also real.
The gray cloak stretched toward my face, like some strange amoeba, its strands long and viscous.
The blue blade turned, twisting.
The creature spat purple blood and went limp.
The sword slid back into its body. The cloaked being fell to the side and slid a few feet down the slope.
A tall figure stood behind it, clad in a shimmering, ice-blue robe. The silhouette looked chillingly human, too tall, with limbs that were too long, but unmistakably familiar. The head was a solid chunk of metal, twisted into a sleek horned shape. The same metal, blue with gold filigree, sheathed their body under the robe. No visible skin. Even the fingers of their right hand, gripping the blue sword, were coated in metal. Their left arm was missing, cut off just below the biceps, and bright red blood spurted from the cut.
None of my briefings had ever mentioned a being that appeared this human. Animals, monsters, inhuman sentients with strange anatomy, vaguely humanoid beings, yes. But never this.
The figure touched their helmet. It split apart and retracted into itself. An older woman looked at me. Her skin was a muted pastel pink in the center of the face, darkening to a vivid turquoise near the hairline. A straight nose with a blunt tip, a narrow-lipped mouth with the same pink lips, and upturned eyes with blue-green irises, slightly too large for an Earth native, but not enough to alarm anyone.
Aside from the skin color, she looked so human, it was terrifying. There were crow’s feet at the corners of her eyes and laugh lines by her mouth. Either the DDC did not know, or they’d lied.
The woman stared at me. Her eyes were sad and mournful.
I stared back.
She swayed and fell.
What do I do now?
The sound of hoarse breathing echoed through the cavern.
She saved me. If she hadn’t stabbed the gray attacker, I would be dead.
Another hoarse breath. Another.
Fuck it.
I shifted on all fours and crawled the few feet to the woman.
The arm was sheared as if by a razor blade, the cut so precise, it was like an anatomy slide. I could see the bones among the bloody muscle. Blood shot out with every breath.
“We’ll need a tourniquet. Hold on.”
I dug in the pocket of my overalls, extracted the paracord I always carried, and pulled it loose. Paracord was a shitty way to make a tourniquet, but she was bleeding out and I had nothing else. I folded the paracord length wise until I had about three-foot stretch of cord, wrapped it around what was left of her arm, and pulled it into a knot. The blood was still spurting.
I patted myself. I needed… Here. I pulled a slim flashlight out of my pocket. I always brought one as a backup to the light in my hard hat. I pressed the flashlight into the knot and tied another knot over it.
“This will hurt, and you’ll lose what’s left of the arm. I’m sorry. We have to stop the bleeding.”
I twisted the flashlight, tightening the knot. Once, twice, three times.
The woman reached out with her right arm and touched my hand. Her fingers were cool, their touch feather-light.
“I’m sorry,” I told her.
The blood stopped spurting. Now I just had to secure this…
The woman touched her own forehead. Her fingers dipped into the skin, sinking into a seemingly solid skull.
It had to be a hallucination. I was losing it from blood loss and pain.
The woman pulled something out of her head. It was round and glowing, like a brilliant jewel lit from within. It was so beautiful. The colors swirled and danced, a stunning, mesmerizing gemfire.
I had to look away, move, run, do something, but I had no will to move. The gemstone was too beautiful to resist. It was coming toward me, held in the woman’s long fingers. Closer. Closer.
The gem touched my forehead.
The Universe unfurled with light and color. A distant voice whispered inside my head.
“Treasure your inheritance, my kind daughter.”
Everything went dark.
am i first?
Certified 🙂
Wohoo, thank you so much!
Whoa, what an ending!
London, that rat. He’s going to get his. Grrrr…..
Thank you! To be continued. 😁
Well, obviously London is not the hero/love interest. Gonna be a fast and exciting ride! Woohoo!
Anne in Virginia
Also London was there for HER, he abandoned her. Gonna be a rough day for him when she makes her report. Seems like all the genuine, decent people in this expedition got ganked and the two selfish assholes got away.
eXACTLY§
This. Is. Awesome.
Thank you. And I’m glad about London, because he clearly was not onboard with professional protocols from Day One. Rules are for other people! A$$hole.
I agree ! Selfish asshole !
Also, thank you for the chapter ! I love it !
Wonderful!
How exciting!
This is amazing. I knew something would go wrong, but the London ship is falling down I guess.
Ooooooooh what the fuck! How delightful to see this world through your descriptions. The fact that she’s got inorganic and organic appraisal will be amazing in a fight. Excited to follow along!
After rereading the last chapter, I wonder if the assault team even made it to the anchor. Maybe Ada will have to close the gate herself since she’s locked in there. After all, if it’s left too long, the gate will pop and those gray creatures could land earth-side. With that broken leg it might take a miracle (and a good dog) to get anywhere.
Thank you for writing, I’m really enjoying this one.
Thank you!!
Ooo an inheritance. I bet it is magical. And I hope she reports that London abandoned her when she gets back to Earth. He better get fired.
ooooooh my gods! nooooo! more! please! @_@ ahhhhhh!
Soo cool 🤩
Well, now I want to punch Melissa in the face. She didn’t even try to help her crew. I am curious about London, though. I thought Ada was his primary focus. Why did he let her get so far from him that he couldn’t reach her in time to protect her. I smell something fishy.
Can’t wait for the next installment.
Yeah this is a far cry from a good guild: the advance team missed the hostiles, the escorts didn’t even try, the head of the miners pushed one of her own people out of the safety zone before she abandoned the rest, and the one person dedicated to our hero’s survival abandoned her. I doubt they could have predicted the enemy incursion would be so deadly, but the way Melissa and London united in throwing away everyone else suggests that this was their plan for any emergency – get away at all costs.
The advance team could be all dead. They are still in there, right?
We’ll get there!
You’ll be hearing “oh come on Mod R!” from the Horde soon. 😀
I’m glad Bear is OK!
Bear should also get an Inheritance for being a good girl.
InBearitance
This cracked me up so hard 😀
Looking forward to the InBearitance spinoff trilogy!
Everyone is glad the dog survived.
Good. The animals should always survive, even if they have to be brought back like Artax in The Neverending Story. I even rooted for the ship cat in the first Alien movie, and I’m not a fan of cats.
wow!
Gah I love this so much. After binging Solo Leveling in every format, all I could think of was how the Hidden Legacy world could parallel so well with the litrpg genre but now EVEN BETTER is a new serial, and with a middle-aged single mom FMC?! This is going to consume me.
Ooooooo! Boo to London! Yay for Bear (and Ada of course) surviving! Did not predict the humanoid! All the squees – can’t wait for the next chapter! (Haha, look at all my exclamation points)
Now, back to my re-read of Kate Daniels… <3
My mind is so blown I can’t articulate my reaction.
This has never happened to me.
Best serial ever, in a genre I had no previous experience or interest.
Your talent truly knows no bounds.
I’ve never been more part of the devouring horde ready to beg MOOOOORE! (pretty please)
Come back on Friday! So glad you like it!
This.EXACTLY this.
Your creativity is so amazing! Great read!
OMG! I couldn’t stop reading it!
That was amazing!
So amazing! Thank you so much! I am hooked and look forward to the next installment. I am so glad it will be published!
Love love love!! Just started Solo Leveling and I am here for the vibes!!
Oooh I shouldn’t have read this before bed. Now I’m going to spend all night seething about London and Melissa.
OMG. That was intense. Cliffhanger. Can’t w@!+ for the next chapter.
Wow! I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Thanks!
This is amazing! Can’t wait to read more!
Nooo! A cliffhanger! At least we only have to w@it 4 days till next instalment. Totally love it, btw.
Having just binged my way through the 2 seasons of the Solo Leveling anime I’m here for it
Wow! Love it.
This was awesome!
I’m not gamer and I’m not much familiar with the LitRPG so I went in without expectations and behold, 2 chapters and I’m utterly hooked.
The gates are fascinating, Ada’s tallent even more so, to the point that my imagination is now running wild picturing running through glowing alien caves and discovering all kinds of weird and incredible stuff.
Is this is a thing? Is there a word for it? Seekers fever? Finders lust?
And of course there was the twist with the two traitors to make things even more interesting. By the way, that did not feel like just another dick making a dick move. It had a weird calculated, planned vibe.
I smell conspiracy.
And I want more!
Holy what the frack!! London, you bastard, I thought you were a good guy! You made me swoon with all your protective vibes! Melissa, you heartless, selfish witch! And OMG I need installment three so I can find out about this inheritance! Man, you guys keep us guessing and on the edge of our seats every time!
omg. Can’t wait to see what happens next! thank you!
I love this! thank you so much!
The only bright spot in this FUBAR is that Ada got to pet the dog!
And my conspiracy overloaded brain thinks it was all planned to get rid of her. Melissa and London are going to be lying through their teeth to cover their ashes.
Wow this is amazing! Can’t believe London and Millissa abandoned everyone to die! Is the schedule Mondays and Fridays?
Yes it is 🙂
Woo, thank you!
Oh wow! That’s a way to end a week and begin the next one. Thanks!
Oh boy! Now life gets interesting. Thank you so much. Very Very Awesome!
I knew something was off about London… that dirty rat! 😤 But Melissa?! Their whole escape was just too pat to not have been planned out in advance, regardless of what London’s job is supposed to be.
And yay for petting the pupper! I’m at the edge of my seat now waiting for the next installment. Got me biting my nails and everything 😅
this is so amazing !!! thank you !!! and I LOVE the fact that she’s older than most MCs, with kids to return to and everything ! Somehow, you are always on point with the story and characters, everything is so cool uuugh
After having just watched solo leveling, excited for House Andrews take on the genre
Wow thanks
Omg, wow, simply wow! This is sooooo good, I could see whole chapter played out in front of my eyes! Absolutely brilliant. Now the long wait for next chapter
Wow! I’m freaking out! This is awesome!
Wow!!
😮
Now I have to go back work!
Thank you for this awesomeness and the suspense!!
Great start to a new universe! Team Andrew rock!! When can we order it?????
This is so amazing! As someone else said, I’m not gamer and not really familiar with LitRPG but I’m loving this story!
just ,,,, wow
I’m smiling so widely from reading this. Thank you! 🙏
Whoa….
whoa! so good! ty ty
Thank you so much for this. I love it so far!
It takes talent to write in these two different genres, sci Fi and fantasy. One of them was my favorite author before I found you guys. David Weber who is kind of opposite of you. You’re best known for fantasy, he’s best known for sci Fi. But you both have success with another genre.
Hmm, I guess I can’t complain about missing Hugh. This is an excellent replacement. Thank you.
Squeeeee!!! I love this! So captivating.
I knew I didn’t trust that guy and that she’d end up alone with the dog!
So she’s a pink lantern now?
Interesting question! We’ll have to w*it and see!
Oh my….
Oh my god the moment I read “a door shut in his eyes” I screamed. I didn’t think he’d be the love interest because he was disregarding protocols and would risk her job, but man I didn’t think he’d be that much of a jerk. And Melissa! Wow. Poor Stella.
Thank you, looking forward to the rest of the story.
Wowwowowowow!!! Omg thank you so much for this! Sooooo good!
The fakeout thinking London could be our possible love interest and then showing his true colors! And Melissa being her friend and the foreman of the mining crew only to push down a crew member while escaping!
2 chapters in and I want this whole series please and thank you!
OH MY!!!
Wow! This was intense and I loved it! This world is interesting and I can’t wait to see what happens next!
And the dog survives, thank you thank you!!
What a way to create a powerful heroine, can’t wait to see what talents and knowledge she inherited. Squeee, so good!
omg omg omg
whenever ada returns. i bet that london and melissa aren’t very truthful in their report.
but first, lets enjoy that new family tie
ohw gawd. when will it be finally friday again? 😅
cant wait
soooooo amazing
OMG! No words! 😳❤️🫣
Gah, this is incredible!!
London, you slimy weasel! This was such a good read.
Beautiful and brutal….
Woah! WOAH! I don’t know where we are going but I am buckled in for the ride.
Also, I love that after chapter 1 everyone was shipping London and Ada and now we’re like throw the whole man out and keep the dog.
This is amazing. Thank you!
I’m buckling in this sounds like it’s gonna be roller coaster of a story!
WOAH! LOVE THE CHAPTER!
Thank you so much for this 🙂
I’ve read it twice so far. I cannot stop thinking about it. Another story, another world to explore. Love it. THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY LIFE HAPPY.
Omg I feel so lucky! So many chapters in this marvelous new world!
Yeow! What a story!
This was really fun. I hope the “mom” does not die immediately and Ada gets some clues as to the value of her inheritance…
I think Tia and Noah are not going to see their mom in a while… Seems extremely unlikely that if Ada inherits the woman’s powers she will be able to just go back like nothing happened. Wonder if there will be cut scenes.
Wow! 😲
I absolutely loved it.
Can’t wait … an interesting world and a middle aged heroine – that’s so cool. The possibilities of how the story could continue – oh my!
Goosebumps!!! I’m covered in goosebumps and it’s not just the fever, it’s the story!
And the cliffhanger too, but who’s counting…
Thank you so much!!
Laurence
Woo Woo!
Oooooooooooooh!!! (Happy dance, happy dance!) Thankyou!!!
OMG! More, please! It is SO hard to be p*tient.
ohhh, so fabulous!
So so good!! I can’t wait for the next installment. You are so talented.
I can’t wait for the rest of the story, but I guess I have to. Sigh. This is another new, exciting world to explore.