Putting final touches on Diamond Fire novella. Yay! We will be done today. The draft is finished, we are just cleaning it before sending it off.
Here is some Leon for you.
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Valentina’s House Catering was in New Braunfels, a very German town in the middle of Texas. We had interviewed larger catering firms from Austin and San Antonio, but Mrs. Rogan trusted Valentina’s and so that’s who we went with.
I parked in front of an old brick building. Leon got out of the passenger seat. Arabella was still in school, and today she was crash-writing a two-thousand-word essay, which was assigned to her a month ago and which she had started this morning. Leon was my battle-buddy for this mission and he was thrilled.
“Cake shop,” he said.
“Yes.”
Leon let out a long-suffering sigh. “Are you sure that I’ll be enough? These places can get pretty rough. You walk into a cake shop and then some gunslinger tells you, ‘You ain’t from around here, partner,’ and the next thing you know, you’re in the middle of the street, your horse is dead, the bad guy’s got your girl by her hair, and you’re down to one bullet.”
“What is going on in your head?”
“It’s a dark, lawless place, Catalina. So dark.”
Joylyn says
OMG, so perfect! Thank you, thank you, thank you for this snippet!
Hope the hands are continuing to heal and you are felling better.
Arianna says
Thank you! Snippets are reeeally appreciated! Leon is hilarious ?
And congrats on finishing Diamond Fire!
Helen says
Add +1 to the above. Thank you for sharing your wonderful characters with us. I admit to rereading your books many, many times. (And l’m always disappointed when I get to the end-lol).
For all the gripes and complaints you get please remember that there are more fans that love your work than the ones who wouldn’t be happy if you tucked them in and told them a new story every night. Please, keep up the good work, and feel better soon.
Judy B says
another +1
Bibliovore says
+1 again
Patricia says
Me, too!
Lauren says
+1
Susan Linch Ravan says
Thank you, now no more typing. Go somewhere with Gordon and relax! Let your fingers alone. Iron and Magic blew me away!
Fera says
Omg Leon! Hahaha.. I love your finishing sentence!
Can’t wait for more Catalina *squeeeee* and a certain someone who looked like a roman general’s son about to enter the gladiator(or something) for the first time *double squeeeee*
Laura says
Oh my gosh, so, so hilarious! I can’t wait! Thank you, thank you!
Duffi says
A snippet on Sunday?
Wow!!
Let your hands heal!
❤️
Mike says
😀 all that needs to be said!
DianaInCa says
Thank you! Love Leon.
Jeanette says
I love me some Leon!! Thanks!!
Dafni says
Leon is awesome. Thanks!
Kathryn says
How fun! I’m looking forward to Diamond Fire more than Kate 10! Thank you for the Sunday snippet. I hope Ilona enjoys the mermaid suit.
Diane L says
This one is going to be so much fun, watching the trouble Catalina et all are going to get into. Thanks for the snippet! Enjoy your “downtime”. 🙂
Shannon from Florida says
Thank you so much!
barbie doll says
I was surprised there is no Nevada input. Will she not appear which would be weird as it is her wedding isn’t it? Or have I missed something? I was looking forward to Nevada as the main character as there are a whole lot of questions I have. Catalina is fun too but too young for anything definitive in the way of relationships. I do like that Leon is coming into his own and no longer feels like such a loser. His sense of humor is dreadful and it matches mine. Good snippet.
Roverman says
They’ve mentioned in the past that it wasn’t going to be a Nevada novel but more a transition for Catalina.
Cowgirl says
Thanks you so much! Please rest and heal. WE NEED YOU!!!
Keera says
Ha! I laughed out loud reading this! Thanks for that!
Monica says
Thank you for the snippet, they are always a pleasure 🙂
And congratulations on finishing Diamond Fire!
Fan in California says
What a hoot!! Thanks!!
BTW How did the mermaid suit turn out?
Rena says
Congratulations! Thanks for the snippet.
Jenn says
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Stephaney says
I love Leon!
Liz says
Thanks and I hope the fingertips continue to heal. Maybe the dictation will become comfortable soon? I sure hope so cause this is hilarious and awesome and omg fabulous painting. The watercolor is beautiful. Keep healing and hopefully have time for a spa day?
Sue says
He he he!!! So dark… Lol! Thanks for the snippet and congrats!! I hope your poor hands and fingers continue to heal, Ilona. I enjoy your and Gordon’s blog so much. Thank you for taking the time to share with us.
rosalita says
Creator bless and keep you both. How was the mermaid tail? I hope your hands are continuing to do well. Thank you for the snippet. Leon’s point of view is always one of a kind. He’s not just marching to a different drum he has a whole band out there in left field.
Pam says
A snippet set in New Braunfels! Huzzah! Hoping the hands are healing well.
Jenn says
Woo hoo to being about done at this stage!! Yay ? Leon might be my favorite… lol.. when he grows up… fun character to imagine …like George and Jack
Margaret says
Thanks for the snippet. I have a Hugh question, if Julie can’t refuse a direct order from Kate and Voron couldn’t refuse Roland than I would think that Hugh can’t actually disobey Roland either but he turned him down when Roland asked him back. Elara is so going to kill Roland…..,? or is she…
Judy B says
Roland purged him,,,, broke the connection,,, etc etc
Sharon says
Exactamundo. That’s why Roland just about fainted when Hugh made the blood needle while hanging from one arm in Nez’s Hold.
Margaret says
Is it that simple? Would Kate be so anxious about her command over Julie if it were that straight forward? Can’t wait to find out. I love these stories.
Patricia Schlorke says
I just read Magic Slays where Kate cleaned and bonded Julie’s blood with hers to save Julie from going loup. Kate didn’t want to break Julie down to have her as a weapon to point to someone. This is what Roland did to Arez (the first Preceptor of the Iron Dogs). That’s why Kate went ballistic when she found out that Roland was talking with Julie and told her what Kate did to her.
Bill G says
Love it. The news that ‘Diamond Fire’ is finished, and the snippet. Now I’ve got to wait for the book to see if my suspicions are correct, about the hazards that will be found in or near the bakery.
Bill G says
Oh, yeah – love the shot of that pair of percussion revolvers. Will someone be using such things? Perhaps magically enhanced ones?
trailing wife says
With all the shooting that lot does? Bill G, a six-gun simply doesn’t carry enough bullets! 😉
Ann M. says
Love it. I can hardly wait until I can read it. Thanks for the snippet. I hope the hands are behaving.
Helen says
You are the snippet Queen, I’m tellin ya.
Lynn Fitzgerald says
?????well done
d LM a says
Totally Leon
he has that 360° surround sense, no matter where he breaks out, he brings it back on point
YOU
have that survivor glee. Congrats on Fire! , gotta nag, was snippet dictated? I hear, ‘you can handle this’ you are enjoying knowing how you are going to move forward.
Go enjoy yourself, fly, float, stomp . . . U grown > •¿•
Monina says
Congratulations!
AND thank you for a really happy way to start my Monday despite the rain soaked streets outside!
Carol says
Leon is a riot. I could hear the background whistle and see the tumbleweed roll across the street. I love it.
Congratulations that Diamond Fire is done.
How are your fingers feeling?
Gale D says
Congratulations! Loved it, thank you.
Liv W says
HEE! (Thanks!) ?
Eli says
Love getting some Leon – thanks!
I am really curious about Rogan’s mother, especially since she has been stealth so far.
Hope the healing continues!
Ami says
??? I ❤️ Leon so hard! Congratulations on finishing the book!! I know how hard y’all’ve worked and I hope you can get some R&R. Thank you for the snippet. It was delicious.
GailK says
Leon sort of sneaks up on you . He reminds me of Ascanio , except Ascanio was raised to be the golden boy and Leon never though he was going to be a Prime. But both have that same sense of humor.
Glad you finished Diamond fire and your hands are improved . And snippet on Sunday
And looking forward to meeting Connor’s mom .
Will Matilda be a flower girl?
Who will walk Nevada down the aisle? Her mom?
Will Nevada carry a bouquet of Carnations?
Loved how you snuck in that her Grandmother also loves carnations.
Take care of your hands and family
Thank you.
Tylikcat says
Leon is flipping adorable. And something about what you said got him mashed up in my head with the snarkiest and most worldly of our UTAs (and bestower of the best nickname ever of my partner in crime.) This is probably unfair to everyone involved, but I’m tired enough to think it’s hilarious.
Vanessa says
In your books the side characters become as interesting and beloved as the main characters. I find myself wondering about them. David Latimer being one. Leon has always been a favorite. I relisten to him narrating the attack scene in Wild Fire quite often.
” Oh No! My brains are leaking!”…snicker..
Carolyn says
I hope your hands are much better. Catalina should just throw him in an innertube and tell him to lighten up. I think my favorite part of the Hidden Legacy is the Nevada’s family interaction.
Lissa says
So excited to hear it’s done – and thank you so much for the snippet!
Hat says
Thanks so much!!! Hope you can take a break and rest your hands enough for a full recovery.
KarinL says
Congratulations on finally getting it done.
I hope you can both get some rest now – you deserve a break!
Sandra says
Love, love, love it! I was really laughing out loud!! Love all Nevada’s family, the interaction is wonderful and hilarious.
Hope the hands are behaving & congrats on finishing Diamond Fire 🙂
Jujubee Delestowicz says
Awesome snippet! #Leonlove
Speedy & lasting healing wishes right to your fingertips. I feel your dictation pain with Dragon Naturally Speaking 😉 you’d think it’d gotten better at interpretations after all these years LOL
Anne says
Perfect timing! I just finished a re-read of the Hidden Legacy books.
So very delightful.
Thank you!
Nancy Carde says
Thanks so much, this is very appreciated.
Can’t wait to hear about the cakes! ?
Artstuff2 says
OMG can’t wait!!!! But I patiently will……. 😉
Jules says
Yay! Thanks for the snippet! You guys are the bestest authors EVER.